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~New Dawn~ (My story after Breaking Dawn) *i'll add more as soon as the mental block is gone jajaja

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TamaraDi |

Member since Aug 2007

Your story is really good, I'm enjoying it alot, especially hearing from Leah's perspective!
~*~GaBi.CoM~*~ |

Member since Dec 2008

Not my best work, but here it is.

-73-
“He’s what?!” she shouted.
“He’s a Halfie, like Ness… Oops!” Seth said.
I was ready to snap his head off, but before I could walk toward him, I saw mom fall to the floor.
“Mom!” I screamed and went to pick up off the floor, while the rest hovered over me.
“Could someone get me some water to wake her up please?” I asked. Seth left for the kitchen and came back with the glass. “Should I throw it on her?” he asked, readying to “spill”.
“No… give me that” I said and to the glass from him.
“Mom, snap out of it. Come on, you can wake up now.” I said, sprinkling water in her face.
Her eyes started fluttering. “What? What happened?” she asked dazed.
“You fainted” I told her.
“Ugh… Sorry Leah, you just caught me there. I wasn’t expecting that one.”
“Don’t worry; to tell you the truth, I was expecting a worse reaction from you than fainting.”
“Yeah, she thought you’d fly off the deep end” Seth said.
“Leah… I probably would have, but my life’s always been full of surprises. Your father wasn’t exactly normal”
She was talking about the fact that dad was a werewolf, I could see she understood.
I got up off the floor and lifted her, then we went to sit on the sofa and everyone followed.
“So… I have a son in law now?” she asked chuckling a little.
“It’s a little too soon for that mom” I said and blushed, stupid reaction!
“They’re just getting to know each other Sue” Jake told her.
She nodded and yawned. “Ok, I think today’s been… eventful enough. I think I need to rest a bit” she said, laying her head on the couch.
“Ok mom, sleep for a bit. We’ll be back later to check on you.”
Holly |

Member since Sep 2007

gabi that was really good... i dont know what your talking about when you say not your best work... love how this is taking its place... cant wait for more...
~*~GaBi.CoM~*~ |

Member since Dec 2008

Thanks so much Holly, you rock! jajaja stay tuned...
Holly |

Member since Sep 2007

you are so very welcome... cant wait for more... hope you dont me asking but what does jajaja mean?
~*~GaBi.CoM~*~ |

Member since Dec 2008

jajaja= laughter :)
Holly |

Member since Sep 2007

thanks for explaining it to me... thats what i thought but want sure.
~*~GaBi.CoM~*~ |

Member since Dec 2008

Ok guys, another page. Hope you like it :)

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I showed everyone out, and then decided to go with them. When we were all outside, I could see a chocolate brown wolf running over to us, Quil.
What now? I thought.
He gestured with his paw for us to wait for him; then he went into the forest and came back in his human form.
“Hey guys” he said.
“Hey Quil, what’s up man?” Jake asked, after giving a high five. (Childish, I thought.)
“I have great news guys” Quil said smiling.
“Well, spit it out already.”
“Remember how the council was still deliberating about ‘changing the treaty’?”
“Yes…” Ness said.
“Well, they changed it alright. Not completely though, we still get to kick vampire butt, just not the Cullen’s. They said the Cullen’s could be allowed to come to La Push.”
Ness gasped and stared at Quil.
“Thank you so much Quil, that’s great news!” she said, looking about ready to start jumping up and down.
“No prob”
Ness looked at Jacob then with wide eyes.
Holly |

Member since Sep 2007

sounds good... you got me on the edge of my seat waiting for more... lol... plz write more soon
Mara |

Member since Jul 2009

the story is awesome!! i love it! plz write more soon! you have inspired me 2 write my own story!!!! thanx. :)
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