yo... keep going its so awesome would you please read my story and tell me what you think of it? its called Jasper's Sisters story

thats cool, so r u and the other gabi writing the story or r u the same person using diff accounts ??

btw, its not corny it just reminds of things ive heard

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Hey everyone, thanks so much for the comments. As usual, i'll keep the pages coming as fast as i can come up with them jajajaja

And yes Lindsey, i'm both gabys, one on myspace and one on facebook

-50-
Tears began to fall down my face, both from the pain
of my cheek and from the disgust I felt toward them all, especially Nahuel.
Out of nowhere, growling began, and I lifted my head off the floor to see that Nahuel and Joham were having a conversation.
“…Think about this Nahuel, she doesn’t seem to be taking to you
in any way.”
“She WILL love me, even if I have to force her.”
Joham sighed, giving up.
This confused me, since when did Joham feel the need to
break his silence to defend ME?
“Well, if you are decided on going along with this, at least give a little time before you start talking marriage…”
I froze. (No!) I thought. (I can’t marry him, I don’t love him, I love Jacob!)
“She will be my wife Joham, she will be mine.” Nahuel said decidedly.
“But what about her family, about this Jacob, what if they come looking
for her?”
“Well, to her family, I shall only have to welcome them into mine.
As for her Jacob… I might just have to exclude him from our circle, permanently, if need be.”
A sudden realization hit me. I was never going to get out of here; I was either going to die or have to marry Nahuel…
I also realized that both outcomes seemed like death to me,
because if I married Nahuel, my heart and my love would die, leaving only a lifeless body for his bride.

-51-
Time passed without my noticing in my prison. I could only guess
at how long I’d been here for from the soreness and weakness in my body, the tired look on my face, and even if it was the last thing on my mind,
the condition of my clothes.
(Aunt Alice would have a fit if she saw me like this…) I though
and then laughed.
This was it; I was officially stir crazy.

Still -51-
I heard footsteps coming closer to me, guessing them to be deliberate;
no vampire would make noise, unless they wanted to be heard.
I shrank back into the wall, wishing I’d just turn invisible and they’d
pass me by.
“Renesmee?” a voice asked, and I knew who it was,
even if i hadn't heard it for as long as the other two.
“Joham?” I asked my voice hoarse from lack of use; I had to clear
my throat.
“This ought to help with that” he said and handed me a tall tube shape
that I instantly recognized as a cup.
I gulped down the liquid, water to my intense surprise and relief.
I didn’t care that I didn’t like water; I’d learn to love it here.
“Better?” he asked.
“Yes” I answered, and my voice was clearer.

-52-
We were silent for a while…
“You know, I heard what you said out there and I just wanted to say thank you.”
“I don’t deserve your gratitude; I helped bring you here after all…”
I stiffened, thinking that maybe I’d been wrong in beginning to trust him.
He laughed. “Don’t worry, I won’t harm you.”
“I don’t get it… Huilen said that the three of you were in this together.”
“Well, in a manner of speaking, yes. See, in the beginning when I saw
how much Nahuel was suffering, I wanted nothing more than to help him.
But I knew I wouldn’t be able to persuade you, so I let it go.
Huilen on the other hand, didn’t, and this is the result” he said,
gesturing to me.
“I thought you hated them”
“No, I could never hate them. He is my son, and she is like his mother
in many ways, so it is impossible for me to have her as well.”
As I began to understand, I felt immense pity toward Joham.
He explained to me that though there were many speculations as to why he’d started creating halfies like Nahuel and me, ranging from the usual “he’s insane” theory to others, his real reason behind his creations,
was his loneliness.

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