-31-
Everything was perfect, well… almost everything. Aunt Alice, Esme and mom got started on planning, the minute we gave them the news, but Aunt Rose wanted nothing to do with it.
The three took care of everything. I’d asked mom why she was so excited about this party, when she was never a party type of person.
“Well, it’s not a party for me, for one thing, and second I want this day to mean as much to you as my wedding to your father meant to me, even if I realized that afterwards” she said, whispering at the end.
From the corner of my eye I saw Aunt Alice smile.
“I knew it would, I told you didn’t I?” she said with a cocky smile on her lips.
“Yes, you did. Thank you for that day, even if I don’t remember it that well. Edward helps by telling me about it every night, showing me the photo album too.”
“Oh, I love that photo album! You looked beautiful that day mom, I hope I look half as good as you on my wedding day.”
Jacob walked over to me then, and wrapped his arms around my waist.
“You’ll look as beautiful as you already are” he whispered in my ear and I smiled.
“And with me dressing and doing your make up, you’re going to be gorgeous!”

-32-
I shared my mother’s views on simplicity up to a point, and Aunt Alice agreed.
Jacob and I agreed to get married on First Beach, but I would go all out on my dress, and decorations,
allowing Aunt Alice freedom to her creativity.
This took months to put together, fitting to my plan of a long engagement.
During this time, Jacob and I spent as much time as we could with each other.
One day though, Jacob told me the pack wanted to meet up with him.
I worried, until I saw dad smile conspiratorially, and later telling me
it was all a ploy for a bachelor party.
Then I noticed that Uncle Emmett and Uncle Jasper were gone too.
“They went to Jacob’s party too. You know how your uncles can’t refuse a party…” Dad told me. “And they’ll probably want to throw him another party closer to the wedding” he said, shaking his head.

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-33-
Uncle Emmett and Jasper got home at about 2 in the morning.
When I asked them where Jacob was, they said they’d left them at his house and that he immediately crashed on the couch.
“Don’t worry; we carried him to his bed.” Uncle Jasper told me when he felt me worry about Jake sleeping uncomfortably.
“Ok…” I sighed
“And he was still breathing when we got him there” Uncle Emmett put in and laughed.
“Uh… thanks”
Emmett laughed his booming laugh when I answered.
I yawned.
“Nessie, you should go to bed sweetheart” Esme said.
“Yes, go to sleep sweetie” mom agreed.
I nodded, feeling the drowsiness trying to pull me under.
“Goodnight everyone”

-34-
I’d told my mom, aunt and grandmother that I really didn’t need a bachelorette party, especially one so soon.
Really though…? I was terrified of what they could come up with, Aunt Alice particularly. I knew she had a tendency to go a bit overboard, and I didn’t want to imagine what she could come up with.
She brought the subject up one day while we were hunting.
“So, what do you want to do for your party?”
“My party…?” I asked, cocking my head to the side.
“Your bachelorette party, silly”
“Oh, I don’t need one really… is it ok if we skip it?”
“But…” she said, preparing her pouting face, the one she used to get her way every time.
I held my hand up to stop her. “Aunt Alice, I gave you my wedding to plan…
Is it too much to ask to skip the parts I don’t think are necessary?”
She sighed resigned.
“You’re right… Ok, no bachelorette party, but what do you want to do?”
I shrugged. “Let’s think about it later ok?”
She nodded.
We concentrated on our hunt then.
Aunt Alice had decided to go deeper into the meadow
to scout for some deer.
I stayed in the clearing, knowing something would come
if I was patient enough.
Suddenly, I heard a rustling of bushes. I was already in my hunting crouch, when I caught the scent. It wasn’t one I was expecting though, it smelled like… me.

-35-
Nahuel, I realized, with an inexplicable stab of fear running though me.
I shouldn’t be afraid of him… but why all of a sudden did I want to run away from this place, run to my family?
“Hello Renesmee” he said.
“Hello” I replied and my voice shook, weird…
“Could we talk for a minute?” he asked innocently, but I could tell something was off.
This wasn’t his usual way of being, not with me at least…
He began to step toward me, seeming more like a predator
than anything to me.
But before he could get too close, arms encircled me and a rag
was put to my face.
As I inhaled, I noticed the scent was not pleasant, and it made my body feel numb and made me drowsy.
I tried to use my hands, to grab at my attacker, but it was useless, I was almost completely under now.

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-36-
When I awoke I was dazed, confused.
Where was I?
I knew I was in a hotel room or something like that, but that was it. I didn’t recognize the painted walls or the furniture or any of it.
I looked around me, desperate to find something that would make sense in all this.
There was a night stand at one corner of the room with a phone and a phone book on top.
My heart jumped inside my chest as I realized that I could soon be free from this nightmare, could be with my family, my Jacob again…
I ran over to the nightstand, but my hopes plummeted as I examined my tools.
The phone book had all numbers scratched out,
that really didn’t matter though because I knew who I’d call.
But when I went to use the phone, there was no sound coming from it.
I looked more closely and found that the line had been cut.

-37-
I was furious. Though I hadn’t been completely conscious at the time,
I knew it had been Nahuel who’d kidnapped me.
I saw red as I thought the name, and all I wanted was to have him in front of me so I could rip his throat out.
(How dare he do this to me? He was my friend, someone I could trust, and did trust, to always have my best interests at heart.)
I didn’t know what he was now, and I didn’t want to think about it anymore.
Suddenly, I heard the room door open. I was ready to pounce on my abductor, when I saw that this was not my intended target.
Huilen had been a part of the plot, one that I didn’t even now yet, but she hadn’t hurt me.

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