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♥~{Anna} T {Baby}~♥ |

Member since Jun 2008

Nessie

"So, what are we doing today?" I asked my best friend in the whole world.
"Whatever you want to do ma cherie."
Mmmm...I loved when Jacob called me this. He had picked it up in France, where he had first told me about imprinting on me. Ok so i practically forced him to tell me, but we didnt really pay attention to that detail anymore. It was all to perfect for us to worry about how it had happened.
"Hmmm....I honestly have no idea what i want to do, nor do I really care as long as Im with you." I said
He smiled his most perfect smile, though it was a little mischevious looking. "Well in that case.." He grabbed my arm and we were instantly leaping over the wall around the little garden where i spent most of my time at the cottage.

I was not very surprised when we ended up in La Push, the reservation he called home, we came here all the time. Although something was different, we were headed to a part of the beach i had never been to, there was a drift wood tree that was washed up in an odd position on the beach so that you could sit on the roots at different levels.
"This is where your mom and I used to come to talk." He told me. "Its always been a special place for me because it reminds me of the second happiest time in my life."
"Wow, Jake, why havent you ever brought me here?"
"Well, Ive been thinkin about bringing you here ever since graduation actually." He seemed oddly nervous, and that was out of character for Jake, especially with me around. We always melted together perfectly never having to try to hard to be best friends as well as madly in love with each other. We were soul mates.
"Actually, I have something I want to ask you Nessie." He said interupting my memories.
"Ok, ask away Jake." I said extremely curious now, he seemed really anxious.
"I honestly dont know how to do this but," he got down on one knee and i instantly knew what he was doing, but i was in shock, so i didnt move or make any sound.
"Nessie, you know how much I love you and you know that I will always love you that much. Will you allow me to make it permanent, or well will you marry me?"

tell me what you think plz haha
April :) |

Member since Sep 2007

good job, keep going. :)
♥~{Anna} T {Baby}~♥ |

Member since Jun 2008

Jacob

Why isnt she moving? Is she breathing? Ok good shes breathing, but shouldnt she have said something by now its been a good minute....
"Yes." It was barely a whisper, but I heard it and she knew I did. I didnt need anything more than that, I had her in my arms with in a second, kissing her passionatly.
"Thank you." I almost sighed in her ear, I was breathless, and so was she. Then i pulled back a little to look into her perfect brown eyes, she still looked a little shocked, and I laughed.
"Yes, this really just happened." I teased her because I knew that was what she was thinking.
"Oh shut up and let me be in shock for a minute." she said jokingly right back. I was ecstatic and she looked happy to.
It was at this moment that I was glad I had already talked to Bella and Edward. That may have been the only day in my life i was acctually afraid of him even though I had known him for almost 10 years now.

I was almost to the steps, and I knew he already knew what i had come to ask. It was sometimes annoying that he was "talented" the way he was.
"Hey Bells, can I talk to you and Edward?"
"Sure Jake." was all she said and they were instantly sitting on the white couch in the middle of the room.
Alice walked by me and laughed, "Good luck." she whispered.
There was a questioning look on Bella's face, and an irritated look on Edwards. I sighed, might as well get it over with. I was greatful that Edward was gonna let me ask instead of just filling Bella in like he often did. He nodded at this thought and I almost smiled.
"Well, I wanted to ask you guys permission to ask Nessie to marry me." I was prepared for almost any reaction at this point, but still Bella took me by surprise as she always did.
"Oh Jake thats wonderful!" she exclaimed and ran across the room to hug me.
"Really, youre happy? I thought you would be mad." I was completely taken off guard by her reaction.
"Of course we arent mad Jake," Edward said, "we knew that you and Nessie would get married some day so how could we be mad."
"Well thank you." i said. Relief was all I felt for a second, and then I was hit with the thought of how in the world I would propose to Nessie, the only person in my world that mattered.
♥~{Anna} T {Baby}~♥ |

Member since Jun 2008

Nessie

I was ecstatic! Still in disbelief that I wasnt dreaming yes, but still very, very happy. Jake had stayed in La Push to tell his dad, but I had to go home it was getting late and mom and dad would wonder where I was.

When I got there, I wasnt even allowed to get to the door before they bombarded me. Aunt Alice first, then Grandma Esme and Aunt Rose shortly after her. The guys Uncle Jasper and Emmett and Grandpa Carlisle were a little more composed and congradulated me, but I was a little confused where were my parents?
"Renesmee."
Mom calling my name from the house told me they were inside, so thats where I went. A little confused by her tone, I moved slower than I usually did around my family, almost human speed. Why did she sound so stern? This was not how my mothers voice usually sounded. She and dad were sitting on the couch in the main house's big downstairs, they looked a little uncomfortable, unusual for my vampire parents they never looked this way.
Then it clicked, I knew in an instant the talk they were about to try and have with me but I didnt even want to think about letting them have it.
"Dont even try Nessie," Dad, said hearing my thoughts. "We're going to discuss this weather you enjoy it or not its very important."
I sighed in defeat and slid onto the chair across from them prepared for the most embarrasing conversation of my life.
♥~{Anna} T {Baby}~♥ |

Member since Jun 2008

Bella

"I never want to have to discuss that topic with her ever again!"
"I know me to love." Edward said, I knew it mortified him just as much as it did me that we had to give our daughter "the sex talk". Although it was probably different than the conversation most parents have with their children, what with us having to throw in the fact that if she ever got pregnant we would have no idea what to do or how to handle it. It was still something i had never wanted to do. We were lying in our bed waiting for morning now, and I could think of no more perfect a place to be. Just after the sun came up we got up and quickly dressed to go to the main house, there was planning to do and I had already been enlisted to help Alice and Esme.

"Alice for the last time we are not having the wedding in Greece."
"But Bella why not!?"
"Because its not how Nessie would want her wedding, Jake either for that matter, trust me on this a simple wedding on the beach in La Push is what would be best for them."
We had been having this argument everyday for the last week. Alice just didnt understand why I insisted on having a small wedding for my daughter. I knew that they wanted to have it on the beach because I flat out asked them, something Alice would not dare do. She was all into keeping every aspect of this whole occasion hidden from them, but I remembered how it felt to not know anything about my own wedding and while it worked for me, my daughter was a completely different person from me and I knew she would be mad if she were kept in the dark. Of course Alice didnt know that they were involved in the location choice, and it made me chuckle to think about it.
"How do we even know that Sam will let us cross the border?" Alice asked trying to undermind my attempts.
"Just trust me Alice Ive already talked to Sam and hes all for it." This was no exageration either, he loved the idea of having the wedding close to his house so his very pregnant wife Emily wouldnt have to travel far since she insisted on coming to the wedding. It had been only a few days after the engagment that Sam had announced that Emily was pregnant, then only a month and a half later Carlisle had told them the good news that it was twins. Emily was only about 5 months along but carrying twins she was twice the size she should be, and in two months she would be even bigger.

The wedding date was set for May 2 so that it would be warm enough that Nessie and Jake's human school friends would not question the choice of an outdoor wedding. Edward would be walking her down the isle and he was also in charge of the music for the reception, but other than those details he knew about as much as the rest of them. Only me, Esme, and of course Alice knew all the little details, like the fact that she was wearing Rose's wedding dress and Alice's garter that I had also worn at my wedding. Or the fact that we were sending her to Esme's Island for her honeymoon, the very place where she was concieved, although she would never know that fact because I had insisted she be kept in the dark as to the significance of the island.
♥~{Anna} T {Baby}~♥ |

Member since Jun 2008

hey guys im anna
im not quite sure about any of this cause i usually dont write stuff so plz give me ur honest oppinion and any ideas u might have
i do ask that you dont post ur stories on mine cause i would like it to be mine and i kno most of you would like to have your own to but u can give me suggestions cause that would be like the coolest thing ever!
well i have 2 go 2 bed now ill post more later! luv ya!
Kelsie Cullen<3 |

Member since Nov 2007

Of course Alice wants the wedding in Greece! :P
♥~{Anna} T {Baby}~♥ |

Member since Jun 2008

lol im really glad you guys like it i promise ill post more as soon as i can think of some things but right now im out so lol ill tell u when i know more
♥~{Anna} T {Baby}~♥ |

Member since Jun 2008

Leah

"Would you calm down already? You knew you would have to meet them sometime. I mean its been like 6 months since I told you everything."
"I know baby, but its still a little unnerving. I mean they are vampires, humans grow up hearing stories where they are the bad guys."
Me and Todd had been having this conversation for an hour now on the drive to the Cullens house from La Push, he had to meet them before the wedding so that we were sure he was safe. This was Edwards idea, he had told us that he remembered what it had been like when he first smelled Bella and he didnt want any of his family to have to go through that.

Ah, Todd, he had been doing so well with all the supernatural ever since I had imprinted on him. The only thing he was afraid of now was Nessie's family. I had laughed when he told me this and joked about at least he couldnt smell them, ugh. He hadnt laughed. While I had filled him in on everything that they could do like Edward's mind reading and Alice's seeing the future, but he still was not at ease and then I told him about Jasper's gift, at this he laughed just a little and said he might just like Jasper. I figured he was only really afraid of Emmett, he had seen just how big he was through Nessie's gift and had shivered then, it was a little funny because he really was big for a human.

Everyone was against the back window wall when we walked through the door and they turned almost all at once, Todd stiffened and Edward said something along the lines of dont worry, probably to whatever Todd was thinking. Well I thought to myself this should be interesting. Edward laughed.
♥Taylor Whitlock/Hale♥ |

Member since Nov 2008

WOW I THINK THAT YOU ARE AWSOME!!! AND SHOULD SO KEEP WRITTING!! I LOVE THE FACT THAT NESSIE AND JAKE HAD WAIT UNTIL THEY GOT MARRIED!! EVEN IN MINE THEY DON'T BUT AT THE TIME I COULD THINK OF NOTHIN ELES TO WRTIE BUT I REALLY LIKE THAT PART!!! SO YOU JUST KEEP WRITTING I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!
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