great story!!!

Wow, great story! You have to keep going.
BTW, could you read mine (New Dawn) and tell me what you think?
Can't wait to hear your opinion :)

this is really good... but why cant seth imprint on anyone... cant wait to read more!

i think its cause he imprinted on Anna... Very good story keep going!!!!plz read my story its called Jasper's sisters story

I tried to act as though I didn't know they'd all heard my conversation with Leah when I walked into the Cullen house. Most of the faces were masks of shock as I looked from Alice to Jasper, Rosalie to Emmett, Carlisle to Esme's concerned face. Bella wouldn't meet my eye and it took all I had to even glance at Edward, because I could feel the hostility radiating from him. For the first time, he frightened me.
"We'd better go or we'll be late." Said Alice suddenly.
"Yes! Of course." said Esme, "Nessie's gone early to bed, Anna. We'll be back as early as we can." She smiled, or at least attempted to smile before hurrying out of the door, followed by the rest of her family. All but one. Edward lingered in the doorway and I didn't even need to look at him again to know what he was about to say.
"Save it Edward. You can lecture me later." I stormed to the couch and threw myself down on it, taking care not to look at him. The last words he spoke to me before he left sent a chill through me.
"What have you done Anna?"

keep going!! its soooo good!! did i guess right earlyer?? if i did message me

awesome Bea!!! I feel so sad for seth but I cant wait to see how u will continue with things now...

Almost as soon as the door closed, I heard faint footsteps from upstairs,
"What's wrong Anna?" said Nessie, in a voice that trembled.
"Nothing, darling." I said, as I crossed to her and put my hand on her head, "Now go to sleep." I ushered her into her room and tucked her in. As I kissed her head she whispered,
"Is Seth coming over tonight?" There was a tug on my heart.
"No, darling. Now go to sleep." I left as quickly as I could and went to my room. There I got out the bag that Rebecca had given me, and in it found two plane tickets to Florence, along with some money and a passport. Then I hurried downstairs and went to the drawer where the passports and documents where kept, all stating false dates of birth to keep up the facade the Cullens lived. I found Nessie's and put it in the bag as well. I put in a change of clothes for her as well, just in case. Then I went up to where she slept and looked down at her. I brushed a lock of her bronze hair away from her face, and she stirred slightly. I slung the bag on my back and picked her up, cradling her in my arms as though she were my own child. She made a little noise but did not wake, she leaned into me and I put my face into her hair whispering,
"I'm so sorry, darling. I'm so sorry." I swept from the room to the garage and put Nessie into the back seat of Rosalie's red convertable. I kissed her head and got into the front seat. I turned the key in the ignition and we sped off toward Seattle airport. As we sped down the highway I saw again that vision of anguish. Bella quivered on the floor and Edward's face was empty. Aro smiled out at me from the darkness, and I shuddered. I knew that soon they would be following me, and I sped up, weaving through the traffic and was relieved when I saw the lights of the airport glaring at me. I pulled up outside and raced with Nessie up to the checkout, putting my tickets on the desk.
"Two for your next flight to Florence please." Luckily I was just in time for one leaving in half an hour. I breathed a sigh of relief that even if the Cullens had left by now, they wouldn't have been able to get here in the car. I passed through security and sat down in the departure lounge, rocking Nessie in my arms. My journey had begun, and there was no going back.

:'[ poor edward :'[ poor bella :'[ poor jake :'[ poor seth :'[ but still good!!!!!!

Renesmee twisted in my arms and her hand found an exposed bit of skin. I gasped as I saw her dreams. It was so peaceful, so happy. We were in a beautiful meadow, love radiated from everyone. Seth was there, and I lay in his arms. The sun was shining and we were a beautiful party. Nessie was playing with Jacob, he tossed her up in the air and she giggled. Edward and Bella looked on lovingly, without any traces of worry or concern. Then, a cloud passed over the sun, and we were plunged into darkness. We saw, emerging over the hill, an even deeper black. It sent a thrill of fear through my heart, and Nessie shuddered in my arms. Then the blackness came into focus and I froze with shock and fear. Hooded figures were advancing towards us, and I recognised the front three immediately as the three beautiful, terrible men that were controlling my life. The Volturi. The Cullens assumed a protective stance over Nessie, but still the Volturi moved forward towards us. Then suddenly it was chaos, Nessie ran through the fighting trying to rip figures apart. Edward was fighting Aro, Bella with Jane. Then came a bloodcurdling shriek and I saw myself on the floor, my limbs ripped from my body, and Caius standing over me, a malicious smile on his face. There was another shriek, and another. Then the Volturi were gone and Nessie was lying shaking with sobs, surrounded by the broken remains of her family. Then the vision was gone, and I felt the front of my top grow wet. I looked down and saw the tears running down Nessie's face. She looked up at me and I clutched her to me.
"It's OK, honey, it's OK. I'm here, it was all just a dream."
"Where are we?" Came the sleepy, tearful reply. I drew a deep breath, and decided to be truthful.
"We're at an airport."
"Why?"
"Do you remember when the Volturi wanted you, but your Mommy and Daddy were prepared to do anything to keep you safe, because they loved you?"
She sniffed, and replied, "Yes." the confusion in her voice was clear.
"Well, before I became a vampire, I had a baby. A little boy. But the Volturi have him and they want to kill him unless.... unless..."
"You give them me." She finished for me. All I could do was nod. Then she did something that surprised me. She put her arms around my neck and said.
"It's OK, Anna. We won't let him die."